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Amy Original500© Member

...going with the flow...
| Joined: | 01-15-2007 |
| Location: | Iowa USA |
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| MyResume: | | | MyJob: | County Outreach | | MyForum: | Baha'i - here and there. :) | | MyLove: | God, life, family, nature | | MyWish: | World Peace! ;) | | MyFile: | | | MyIntro: | | | MySex: | female |
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Posted: 06-24-2008 07:09 pm |
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My mom sent this to me...said it reminded her of things I would write when i was that age.
My 8 year old nephew wrote this for a school assignment. He wrote with such expression (and sound effects)....Here is a snippet:
"It was a hot summer day. It was as loud as a monkey. Oh oh, ah ah. It felt like I was melting into the ground. I saw my pool and asked my mom if I could go in. She said yes. Canonball! SPLASH. I felt so good. I got out and saw a bzzz bee. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I ran into my house, and changed and came out again. I sweated crazy. I just had to make it to the summer party where there is ice cream, water, ice and a pool. So tired, must rest, but I have to make it to the party. I'm in hot lava. I feel like...oh oh oh oh oh, almost there. Yay. I made it. I must have water. Much better.....Now it's night. Yaaaaaay!"

Just gotta love it!
Please feel free to offer other examples.
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HappyCrazyMama Guardian1000© Member
| Joined: | 02-18-2008 |
| Location: | Wisconsin USA |
| Posts: | 36 |
| MyResume: | | | MyJob: | Mom, Family child care provider, | | MyForum: | | | MyLove: | My family | | MyWish: | Happy and healthy children | | MyFile: | | | MyIntro: | | | MySex: | |
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Posted: 06-25-2008 08:18 pm |
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My hubby teaches summer school writing to 2nd graders and was very impressed.
 Cloth diapering stylish? You betcha, come see why!
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